Thursday, April 26, 2012

part three fourth post

Summery

Using an open source such as a wiki is extremely dangerous in terms of academic health as opposed to a deep web source such as the GVRL.  It is much safe to utilize peer reviewed papers and scholarly works rather than someone's rant on a blog, prettied up to look like a verifiable source.  You can use a wiki, as long as you search out the source cited and verify it is viable.

part three third post

three research questions:

1.) how can you verify a source on the internet is reliable?
2.) what types of information can you find on the internet?
3.) what laws are in effect for the internet, country by country, and how can you ensure you are not violating them -cross boarders?

part three second post

topic; internet
tool: Wikipedia
broadband
internetwork
packet switching
internet corporation for assigned names nad numbers
internet freedom
internet censorship
peer to peer
 Wikipedia: The Free Encyclopedia. Wikimedia Foundation, Inc. 22 July 2004. Web. 10 Aug. 2004

part 3, first post

topic: internet
tool: GVRL
right of privacy
obscenity
sex crimes
sodomy
search and seizure
freedom of speech
censorship
libel and slander



Pornography. Gale Encyclopedia of American Law. Ed. Donna Batten. Vol. 8. 3rd ed.  Detroit: Gale, 2010. p36-41.

Thursday, April 19, 2012

Unit 2: Plagiarism


Parte Uno


                  Read over each of the following passages, and respond on your own or as a class as to  
                 whether or not it uses citations accurately. If it doesn't, what would you do to improve the
                  passage so it's properly cited?
1. Last summer, my family and I traveled to Chicago, which was quite different from the rural area I grew up in. We saw the dinosaur Sue at the Field Museum, and ate pizza at Gino's East.

Citation not needed. This was an observation of the writer his or herself.
2. Americans want to create a more perfect union; they also want to establish justice, ensure domestic tranquility, provide for the common defense, promote the general welfare, and secure the blessings of liberty for everybody.

Citation may be needed.  While this may indede be considered common knowledge, as it is an opinion of the writer of what Americans "want," it has the feel of a quote, or otherwise quoted ideas.
3. I find it ridiculous that 57% of high school students think their teachers assign too much homework.
Citation needed.  Where did the writer discover this specific statistic?
                  Numbers 4, 5, and 6 all refer to the following passage from Martin Luther King's "Letter  
                  from the Birmingham Jail":
You deplore the demonstrations taking place in Birmingham. But your statement, I am sorry to say, fails to express a similar concern for the conditions that brought about the demonstrations. I am sure that none of you would want to rest content with the superficial kind of social analysis that deals merely with effects and does not grapple with underlying causes. It is unfortunate that demonstrations are taking place in Birmingham, but it is even more unfortunate that the city's white power structure left the Negro community with no alternative.
4. Martin Luther King was certain that nobody would want to be contented with a surfacy type of social analysis that concerns itself only with effects and doesn't deal with root causes.
Aknowledgment needed, as this is a thinly worded paraphrase, but it is a paraphrase none the less.
5. Martin Luther King wrote that the city of Birmingham's "white power structure" left African-Americans there "no alternative" but to demonstrate ("Letter from the Birmingham Jail" para. 5). 

Cited correctly
6. In "Letter from the Birmingham Jail," King writes to fellow clergy saying that although they "deplore the demonstrations taking place in Birmingham, your statement fails to express a similar concern for the conditions that brought about the demonstrations."
Citation needed.  This is a direct quote, even if partially rearranged. Merely rearranging words or substituting words is plagiarizing.
7. My friend Kara told me that she loves living so close to the ocean.
Citation not needed, as this is an observation of the writer.  Or citation needed, if this is to be considered an "Interview" of Miss Kara.
8. Americans are guaranteed the right to freely gather for peaceful meetings.

Citation not needed, as this is common knowledge in America.


Parte Dos.
For the final element of this assignment, please write a paragraph summarizing what you’ve learn and what steps you’ll be taking to make sure that you avoid plagiarism throughout your academic career.


What I've learned is that citations can be beyond belief confusing.  There are a few nuances to ensuring that you are not actually plagiarizing someone else's work, but putting forth your ideas as inspired by their work.  If you feel that direct quotes will be a much more powerful tool in your paper, by all means do use them, but give the credit where it is due. I, myself, intend to visit the writing center and have my paper peer reviewed by the tutors and professoras there to ensure I have cited properly.
Chau

Wednesday, April 11, 2012

First new post

Where to start?  This assignment directed me to create my new blog and online research Journal. The instructions sent me to Blogger.Com, or is it Blogspot.com?, (I'm not sure which) to set up this online work space.  I really couldn't tell you which it is, because the whole process was so inhumanly annoying I'm not quite sure where I am, and an seriously hoping I've got it somewhat right so I can get the correct amount of points! Why we had to go to an outside locale, I know not.  Moodle has a blog feature right on your profile.  Why wouldn't this suffice? But I digress.  After fighting my way through three different Gmail addresses, since the first two apparently did not have permission to view the blog home page, here I am. The one thing I have learned?  Not only do I despise blogs, the fact that I now have to write one has me so thoroughly annoyed I think I might be mistaken for a true blogger! Post after post of nothing very important to say, simply rants and anger and rants. Hopefully further assignments will steer me in the directions I need to go.
  I belong to Facebook, as does most of the world, and enjoy when I can read the little day to day bits from my friends, but none of them believe that is anything more than the equivalent of sending out a mass text message.
I can honestly admit I prefer typing to actually handwriting my thought and words. I guess my deep seated aversion and hatred for blogs is too many people take the words they read in a blog as the Gospel truth. That is just not the case!!!